Dani and i were thinking on having a trip all around europe on our next vacation. This trip is going to be exciting and we will have a lot of adventures. We're going by plane, our first stop is Paris, the city of love. We are going to join a Eurotrip group. This will be our first trip without our parents, so that's really thrilling.
When we arrive; our plan is to go out because we're spending only 3 nights in Paris, because we need to travel to other cities. At night we agreed to go clubbing and dancing. The next day we will visit the Eiffel Tower in the morning, and on the afternoon we will go shopping. After doing those activities in the daylight we'll go out clubbing again late at night. The second day we are going visiting the Louvre Museum; this is one of the most well-known museums in the world. I would like to take a picture of Leonardo Da Vinci's painting, which is entitled as The Mona Lisa. On the third day we will be going to Le Chateau de Versailles, and we are going to spend our last day there. I love to photograph, so there are going to be many pictures of our amazing trip. The final part of our stay in Paris is to take the train to our next stop of the tour; Zurich.
Stay tune guys.
Very good use of the prepositions, the times and the present progressive!
ResponderEliminarOnly a couple of errors:
- "Vacation" is usually in singular (no como en espanol, que decimos vacaciones)
- We "agreed" to go clubbing and dancing. (Debe ser en pasado, porque la narracion no se esta haciendo en presente)
- There "are" going to be many pictures.
Because pictures is in plural.